She is
The agate in his pocket,
The weight on his mind,
The pebble in his shoe,
His worry stone…
Yet
She is
Precious.
- Follow unbuttoned or undone on WordPress.com
-
Recent Posts
Blogroll
Looking for a Post?
She is
The agate in his pocket,
The weight on his mind,
The pebble in his shoe,
His worry stone…
Yet
She is
Precious.
Comments are closed.
Very true.
Paul
LikeLike
Thanks Paul.
LikeLike
Interesting. Thinking …
LikeLike
A riddle?
LikeLike
No. Just thinking it is perceptive
LikeLike
It’s a gift. Laughing.
LikeLike
It is
LikeLike
This is a good one………….from meme ……writing authority. lol
LikeLike
Glad you liked it.
LikeLike
Thank you. Yes you are!
LikeLike
Nice simple and understandable poem that is very relatable.
LikeLike
Thank you. From time to time I produce those too. 🙂
LikeLike
What are the others that you produce?
LikeLike
Haiku type and not quite Haiku. You may want to check Glorious Morning, and anything with Dawn or Winter Sun in it. Snapshot-No Camera is a fairly standard poem that may amuse you. Go ahead explore!
LikeLike
Very nice writing – love the contrast at the end.
LikeLike
Thank you. I learned a few things reading a lot of great haikus. Smile.
LikeLike
I love poetry and I have a handicap, I can’t wrap my head around writing any 😦
LikeLike
Poetry is letting the illogical mind have its say; it’s life in metaphors; it’s playing with words, giving them rhythm and music when you can’t read a note; it’s grabbing life by the throat when it takes your breath away…. it’s staying unbuttoned long enough to fully feel it.
My definition anyway.
LikeLike
lets just say, I missed the poetry talent class. At least I enjoy poetry though
LikeLike
That’s what matters. Poetry is subversive too, I read somewhere.
LikeLike