As he left
Winter sun painted
Lavender ribbons
And golden feathers
All over the sky before he hid
Behind the mountain
The Med sighed
Then withdrew in the dark
As he left
Winter sun painted
Lavender ribbons
And golden feathers
All over the sky before he hid
Behind the mountain
The Med sighed
Then withdrew in the dark
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Very nice.
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Thank you
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Beautiful.
Did he look back before he closed the door?
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no. smile
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Let us just hope he wakes up and comes back running
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Les Alpes Maritimes cachent bien le soleil.
La Med n’a plus la lumiere.
Le monde dort.
C’est bien et, comme ta poeme, tranquille.
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C’est ca. Chez moi, c’est le Massif des Maures qui cache le soleil et j’ai une petite montagne tout a cote a l’ouest, donc le soleil se couche toujours derriere elle. Tout est tranquille, c’est vrai.
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Ah, I sense the sadness at his leaving, and yet not sorrow
But who am I to judge
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There is no sorrow, you read it right. Smile. A beautiful day ended too soon.
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I am sure it will return. Good luck mon amie
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Thank you. Sometimes a poem is just a poem.
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Yes
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There’s always a bit of bittersweet at the close of a beautiful day…, a longing for just a little more time, but the realization of the reality that it is over. What a beautiful metaphor for life, Em.
Paul
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Thank you Paul. Good to see you around.
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